Poor Imp

Same remarks as those above for Belle. ^_^ ...I think you've got Pocohontas quite a bit more balanced in proportions. But her shoulders seem...ah, broken? Crumpled rather. I very much ...

I'm an Atheist, but I do oppose it being considered a religion. As the quote goes, it's like calling bald a hair colour. My thought precisely. What's the point of ...

Happy Birthday JACK! ...Many happy returns, best for your year, all that and anything else fortunate for you, Jack. ^_^ IMP

Whether the Bible is absolutely precise in factual detail is an irrelevant point as firstly, the books in it are differentiated by intent ; and secondly, it cannot be the ...

I wasn't using Nyconz's set-up. And how do you know Satan had free-will? We only have God's word for that. ;) No, the way I was looking at it was ...

Maybe history was written by the Victor? Maybe Satan was a freedom fighter, fighting a battle against a tyranical enemy he knew he couldn't possibly win against, but refusing to ...

Rather fond of the conspiracy theory, perhaps? A moment here to repeat what you've said. Satan gets petulant and jealous of God's power. He thinks, being the top of the ...

Imp, you should probably know that you would've gotten 2nd, but you deviated from the form. The first line of this should've been " sanctus , sanctus , spills" according ...

Kitty: Thank you. 'Tis pleasant to think I pulled off the structure that has annoyed you previously without annoying. ^_~ Clau: Ack, yes - you've hit two points on punctuation. ...

A pink sword, Adam? o0' Ha, on the note of levity, I love the arbitrary dash of different weapons and electricities in the thing. Still, the colours are a little ...

The Nave Has Twilight Note: Imp remains no familiar to poetry... but the villanelle was a challenge, for Whence. Rather like to hear responses to it...? -- The nave has ...

You know where and how to look at something, Fab, photographically speaking. They look like stories; rather than the commonplace noun 'buildings'. IMP

Hey Benz. ^_^ Welcome to YWS. Before I glance over the piece, I'm glad you dropped in; and you might want to introduce yourself in the Welcome forum. You always ...

Hullo Familiar, To begin, you've got a penchant, I'd say for dialogue. 'Tis always a good way to move a story, especially when it's done thoughtfully; and a brisk pace ...

Personally, I would compact the outer designs a bit closer to the eye itself and do some varying line-thickness work. A second to Waffles' wise remarks. ^_~ Doubtless, evil ought ...